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Anyone who can come up with a background story for this picture can send it to me, and it will be added to the text.

First story idea by girlwiththeartfolder.deviantar…:  

After centuries of war, the luprinas ended up loosing their throne and title to the Odius, who not only banished all who opposed them, but also brought peace for everyone, but also re-built the planet to make it one of the most powerful, ruling planets on the galaxy. Swearing revenge for her ancestors, Zivira, the mistress leader of a dark force, threatens the young and valiant ambassador, Shuria. 

At first, Shuria doesn’t find Zivira as much of a threat since she feels that her planet’s powerful security wont allow any foolish nemesis to reach her castle. However, Zivira has managed to find a way to sneak into the castle by using the planet’s old tunnel systems. Once she managed to reach the ambassador’s bed chamber, she takes a sample of her hair from a comb and uses the DNA to disguise herself as Shuria herself. 

Just as Zivira orders the capture of Shuria, claiming she’s a fake in disguise, the young ambassador manages to escape being captured as she quickly realizes what is going on. 

Despite Zivira’s disguise fooling the civilians, some of Shuria’s loyal followers instantly begin to realize her change in behavior and plans. This makes Zivira realize that in order for her plans to succeed, she would have to assassinate the former ambassador’s followers by framing them. 

Just as Zivira orders the arrest of the followers, Shuria manages to save them in time as they all realize what has happened and decide to plot together to take back the throne before Zivira uses it to summon the planet’s nemesis to destroy all of the Odius followers and civilians as revenge. 

As Zivira makes a public speech in front of all the citizens, pretending to be Shuria, the real Shuria re-appears and confronts Zivira as the two end up dueling one on one. It is when one of Shuria’s followers manages to destroy the disgusing device that the dark mistress’s true form is revealed in front of everyone. 

Despite trying to find any possible way to escape, Zivira is at the mercy of the Odius who surround her as she tries desperately to fight her way out, only to receive a death sentence from Shuria, ending the dark mistress’s scheme once and for all.

Zivira's body is put in an ice block and put on display as a warning for all those who dare go against the Odius. 
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I like this, because the blonde won with a plunge of her light sabre through the back and out the front of the Sith! Anytime a swordfight duel happens, that's the outcome I want to see! The blonde should always win, for no other reason, than blonde's have finer cunt hair.
And in spite of the fact that she's got kinda vampish teeth, I love those turquoise blue eyes! I also love the sadistic look on her face, as she deals the death blow to her brunette nemesis. And, for that matter, I love the pained and anguished look on the brunette as the blonde's light saber pops out her chest plate.

Which brings me to my critique of what I'd like to see, that would make it even MORE sexciting to this perv. I'd like to see significantly LESS tit coverings on these women. LOTS of cleavage should be shown, that portrays them as not just sexy bombshells, but also as somewhat of classy dominatrix 'large & in charge' women of stature and prominence.

In addition, I'd also like to see somewhat more of a side view on this death shot, the better to see the cleavage of BOTH women, to decide which one had the biggest tits, AND to also see the light sabre coming out through the middle of the brunette's left tit, in a huge splash of blood, depicting the sure death you would expect to see, from a light sabre blowing through her heart, and all that other yummy flesh!

OR, given that her legs are so deliciously, and invitingly spread, the saber could just as easily have burnt through her robe, and up her cunt, through her body, and out her chest just under her left tit, entering it from the underside, and then blowing out the top in a huge splatter of steaming blood everywhere! Now you know why the importance of cleavage revealing dresses.